Comic panel practice 4
Prompt 14: a perfect snow day
I drew the apocalypse. One more page and I have a bingo
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Much thanks for the advice I got in the last page. I tried to maintain a downward flow with the dialogue this time.
I appreciate every feedback so don't feel afraid to point out stiff dialogue, unreadable writing, bad paneling etc.
I'm low-key loving the grumpy middle aged dude with the spunky kid dynamic.Dec 14, 2022
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Comments
Wait is the snow ash from apocalypse bombs!? And the dynamic between those two seems fun! :D
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•I love how you're trying new things with each page. But also in your gallery the unison of the color palette across the different pages is so cool.
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