

Loraline Davian, first year. Ability: CyrokineticHow and when:
Loraline was playing outside with her friends during recess, when suddenly a large rock was kicked in-front of her friend. Her friend ended up falling over, and scrapping her knee. All of her friends (including her) surrounded the fallen friend. Suddenly, when she had the sudden urge to pet her hand on her friends knee, a layer of ice surrounded the injury, and a good 25 seconds later, you couldn’t tell anything happened. Loraline was in shock, and ended having her mom take her to the hospital. She found out she had Cyrokinetic abilities. (Healing with the power of ice) Loraline was 14 when this happened. (Last year of middle school)
About her power:
She isn’t fully able to control it. Sometimes, she’ll suddenly pop an ice cube, or make frost go across the table. Of course, her parents have supported her throughout this. Some of the ability’s she can do, create tiny ice-cubes, create frost on a flat surface, and create mist. She isn’t sure how, or when to control her magic, but whenever someone is hurt she can always help!
Fun facts:
She (tries) to make ice cubes for her coffee!
She isn’t really 17 (she’s actually 15, she just likes to tell people otherwise)
She prefers spring over winter!Jan 21, 2023
Loraline was playing outside with her friends during recess, when suddenly a large rock was kicked in-front of her friend. Her friend ended up falling over, and scrapping her knee. All of her friends (including her) surrounded the fallen friend. Suddenly, when she had the sudden urge to pet her hand on her friends knee, a layer of ice surrounded the injury, and a good 25 seconds later, you couldn’t tell anything happened. Loraline was in shock, and ended having her mom take her to the hospital. She found out she had Cyrokinetic abilities. (Healing with the power of ice) Loraline was 14 when this happened. (Last year of middle school)
About her power:
She isn’t fully able to control it. Sometimes, she’ll suddenly pop an ice cube, or make frost go across the table. Of course, her parents have supported her throughout this. Some of the ability’s she can do, create tiny ice-cubes, create frost on a flat surface, and create mist. She isn’t sure how, or when to control her magic, but whenever someone is hurt she can always help!
Fun facts:
She (tries) to make ice cubes for her coffee!
She isn’t really 17 (she’s actually 15, she just likes to tell people otherwise)
She prefers spring over winter!Jan 21, 2023
Comments
Alright, first of all I apologize for how long this analysis took, cipher academy had a bit of a pause in taking in new students, but it's back now! So, about Loraline, she does look rather cool, but there are a few things that might need to be altered. For example while her power is quite original, it unfortunately counts as two powers, she creates ice and she cures people, so she would need to keep just one of them, no student has ice powers so she could keep those, and if you really want to keep the healing powers instead, maybe she would need to have ice (not make it, have it as material) for it to work? We could develop that if you wanna keep that part of her power. Also, you did mention that she cannot control her power too well yet, but that unfortunately does not count as a drawback, she needs something that could actually prevent her from using her power if she doesn't pay attention to it. Also, I don't know if you're aware that when a student turns 20 and they are not in Advanced, that student switches to a different school, so if she's 15 at the 1st year, she won't reach the 7th year (when she becomes advanced) before turning 20. If you know this and you're fine with her changing schools at her 6th year we can keep it; if you want for her to stick to Cipher Academy, you would need to make her younger. One last thing is her backstory, the fact that there's people with superpowers is a secret, even to the government, which is why it's impossible that she found out by going to the hospital; and usually the shadow helpers make sure that the least people possible know, so the fact that all of her friends, the hospital and I assume her family know doesn't really work with canon. I'm sorry if this sounds mean, it's just to make sure that the characters fit the universe!! Again, I'm sorry that you had to wait so long, and if you just let me know about these things it would be awesome <33
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