decadence arc - Rokuro

I am not 100% satisfied, i think there are too many lines on her chest and overall this piece is confusing
What do you think? How can I improve next time?
Also, general tips on how to do backgrounds with watercolours?

Reference from an artwork by champi on twt Dec 24, 2022

Comments

rrriptide

4yr

GASP! How did I miss seeing this??

It's so so beautiful!!! I love the eyes and the hair and the wings

Really pretty!!

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tokomi

4yr

Have you used a photo reference for that pose? I think her arms and chest are confusing, as if you couldn't deside if she's facing forward or sideways. If this lines were meant to be like cracks, then that's a very cool idea, but yeah, there are too many of them in one place. Also I think the nose is too tiny, even within the small-nosed anime girls standards :D
Still, I love the vibe of this piece and flow of the hair. It makes me wonder who this character is and that's not easy to achieve

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roku_chan

Italy

Roku; she/her; shy at first but badass when you know me